留学文书essay修改范文

by admitwrite · 2016-07-03

留学文书

   留学文书essay修改范文

    Essay

    I would like to use three “s” to modify myself.
    First, sportive. I’m a sport lover. I used to learn fencing in my primary school. But football and basketball are my favorite now. I used to play on the varsity team and won a lot of admiration from my peers.
    Now I’m interesting in basketball. The coach of the JV team accepted me to be one of them because he considered me to be a talented, hard-working player. I make progress everyday and he wanted to send me to Varsity Team next term. But my biggest pride is the newly-earned honor in the 3-man basketball match held in my school. I worked together with another two classmates. And we became the top 4 among the 30 teams. We deserved to win because we had great cooperation and we practiced hard!
    Second, smart. I’ve shown my talent and strong interest in Math since primary school. I have always played an active role in Math classes. My Math teachers like me because I’m logical, flexible and persistent.
    I’ve won prizes in the China’s Olympic Maths. And I’ve been taking Extra Maths classes outside the school. It’s all because of my keen Interest in this subject.applicatino letter Last, special. I like St. James because of its home atmosphere, good academic attention, dynamic school life and friendly students. It’s a special school. I’m special too—because of my personality, my experience and my spirit… I would really appreciate it if you could go over my application materials and reconsider me as a promising young man.
    Mr. Archimedes says,“Give me a place to stand on, I can move the earth.” And I will say, “Please give me a chance, I’ll make myself a pride of Saint James!”